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When you love someone
with all of the love
that you body could give

You give them your soul
and they make you bold
enough to take on the world.

The world that we all know
and the one that we loath
with all of our exitance.

Their arms opened wide,
a safe haven for you to cry
your many tears.

Though the world wishes not
for them to be far apart
but still they try to be together.

When one of the contumplates death,
the other wanted to protect
them from that suicide.

And ever they they speak
about the happenings of each
moment that they are apart.

Until the end of time
this one thinks i will try
to be the person she thinks i am.
©2006-2009 ~vampyre-servent666
:iconvampyre-servent666:

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a poem that i wrote.

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:iconkittykat643:
very good :clap: made me cry... i just broke up with my boyfriend sadly

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Yeah we've been there rocked that got crunk and all that dancing sexy without a pole yeah haters thats how we role.
:iconvampyre-goth:
I dont know what to say. J'amour toi beaucoup

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I can't be anything but me
:iconpoetrycat:
cant stop... crying... good job. i loved the last 3 stanzas the best

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Don't look back
:iconand-if-i-jump:
Really good, the last 2 or 3 stanzas really got all the emotions together and clear, I love it!

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Living life to avoid it

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March 2, 2006
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